Sunday, September 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday post #13


Rising Currents: Louisiana Moon

Setup:

Kris just went through a lot of shit—the hell house shaking like an earthquake, plaster falling in splats on the floor and shrunken heads. She is standing in the middle of the living room looking at a picture, she thinks is her suspect from 100 years before. Now she comes face to face with a witch.

Here are the six:

A reflection was caught in the glass of the photograph with the lightning strike. Kris felt her breath still in her chest. Snatching the picture off the wall, she wheeled around. She faced what she was sure was a witch.
Thunder crashed leaving and eerie silence in its wake. A high pitch keening filled the space between her and the crone.

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I hope you enjoyed my six! I'd love to hear from you. Thanks for stopping by and enjoy the rest of you Sunday.

Lani Rhea

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15 comments:

  1. Great six Lani, getting me in the mood for Halloween!

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  2. Perfect set up of the scene- the storm added a nice touch to the moment

    Dawne P

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  3. Lani, I love it! Excellent suspense there.

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  4. Excellent six, loved the description of the storm.

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  5. So descriptive...I could picture it perfectly. Great 6!

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  6. What a great suspenseful six. The lightening strike baring the crone'ks reflection, the eerie silence....OOOOOH!:) xo

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  7. I love this part! AS always, you are a great story teller. You know how to build suspense.

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  8. Mysterious doing! Definitely intriguing and spooky.
    Great six!

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  9. Thanks everyone. I'll try to return the favor tomorrow.

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  10. I want a fire, some popcorn, and that damn book!! Great job!!

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  11. Incredible six! I must know what happens next!

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